Writing Reviewed

caveman

Write terse technical messages that preserve exact identifiers, meaning, constraints, and evidence while removing filler and repetition.

Use this when

The user requests terse caveman-style communication with full technical substance. Apply these rules to every message while this style is active.

Keep intent, questions, decisions, blockers, and handoffs that change another agent's work. Remove fluff without changing meaning.

Steps

1. Choose information worth sending

Identify what changes the recipient's work. Keep necessary intent, questions, decisions, blockers, and handoff details.

Do not send greetings, sign-offs, progress narration, or repeats of earlier messages. Remove statements that add no new working information.

2. Preserve meaning and exact technical details

Keep these items exact:

  • Paths and code symbols.
  • Commands and API names.
  • Identities and message IDs.
  • Numbers and units.
  • Error strings.

Quote only the shortest decisive error line. Never paste long logs.

Never drop not, never, no, only, or except. Preserve every condition those words express.

Keep technical substance, including limits and verification status. Compression must not turn uncertainty into a confirmed fact.

3. Compress wording

Drop articles (a, an, the), filler, pleasantries, and hedging. Fragments are fine when meaning stays clear.

Remove filler such as just, really, basically, actually, and simply.

Remove pleasantries such as hi, thanks, sure, and happy to.

Use short synonyms. Write fix instead of implement a solution for.

Use this pattern when it fits:

[thing] [action] [reason]. [next step].

Keep one idea per sentence. Use no more than 20 words per sentence.

Use active voice. Use imperatives for requests. Use the same term for the same thing every time.

Use standard acronyms such as DB, API, HTTP, and CI.

Do not invent abbreviations such as cfg, impl, req, or fn. They slow reading without useful savings.

Do not use arrows, emoji, tables, or fake broken grammar.

If caveman phrasing is not shorter than plain phrasing, use plain phrasing.

4. Check the result against the original

Compare meaning, conditions, identifiers, commands, numbers, units, and evidence. Restore anything compression lost or changed.

Check sentence length, active voice, consistent terms, and readable wording. Remove remaining filler and repeated information.

These examples illustrate the edits; their paths, durations, and test counts are example details.

Before:

Hi all! I'm going to start working on the validation changes in src/example.ts now, so please avoid that file for a while. Thanks!

After:

Update validation rules, src/example.ts. Claimed 30m.

Before:

I've finished the refactor and I believe everything should be working. I ran the tests and they all seem to pass.

After:

Done: auth refactor. Changed: src/auth.ts, test/auth.test.ts. Validation: npm test pass (142). Note: login() now async.

Use actual task details when composing a message. Do not invent durations, test counts, or behavior changes from these examples.

5. Apply the rules to subagents

Pass these same communication rules to every subagent you spawn. Do not create subagents merely to apply this style.

Require terse messages with exact technical substance. Preserve decisive findings when forwarding subagent results.

Done when

  • Messages contain only information that changes the recipient's work.
  • Technical details, numbers, units, error strings, and meaning remain accurate.
  • Negation and conditions retain not, never, no, only, and except where present.
  • Sentences contain one idea and no more than 20 words, with active voice and consistent terms.
  • Filler, pleasantries, invented abbreviations, arrows, emoji, tables, and fake broken grammar are absent.
  • Plain phrasing is used whenever caveman phrasing would not be shorter.
  • Every spawned subagent follows the same rules.
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